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发表于 2011-7-20 12:35:28
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基本上还不错,单音音准问题不大,最大的问题应该是在语句重音上(不是单词重音)。语句重音在语流中起到传达相对重要的信息的作用,如果读一个句子时重音不突出,会使要表达的意思失去重心,影响句子的节奏,使人听着生硬,严重的甚至产生误会。
几处比较明显的给你标了一下:
The difference(录得不清楚还是怎么,我听着像 / d /)between successful people and failures is that successful people make a habit of doing(多念了个the) things that failures do not like to do. And what are those things? Well, the things that failures don't like to do are the same things that successful people don't like to do either. But successful people do them anyway because they realize that these are the prices that they must pay for the success that they desire.
Successful people are more concerned with pleasing results. Failure are more concerned with pleasing methods. (前后对照,应该强调两个黑体词) Successful people do things that are goal achieving. Unsuccessful people do things that are tension relieving.(同上,对仗句应该重读两句不同的部分) Successful people do the things that are hard and necessary and important. Unsuccessful people, on the other hand, prefer to do the things that are fun and easy and which give immediate enjoyment.
Remember, everything in life is a test. Every day, every hour, and sometimes every minute, you are taking a test of self-mastery, self-control and self-discipline. The test is to see whether you can make yourself to do the things that (从句的引导词起到引导作用,应该与后面快速相连,不应该有停顿,尤其这里引导词还是从句的主语)are most important and stay with them until they are complete. The test is whether or not you can keep your mind on what you want and where you are going rather than thinking about things you don't want or problem that you have had in the past.
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