急盼发音纠正

mayfisherman

Hi, 本人学英语多年，可是一直学的是“哑巴英语”。最近意识到口语的重要性，想下功夫系统地进行提高。
自觉发音不咋地，但苦于没人点拨。随机地录了一段，希望版主能不吝赐教。先谢过了。
注：因原rar文件太大，故将其分割成六部分上传。逐一下载到同一目录下，点任一文件解压即可。

IsaacZ

请提供原文，我为你作下标记。

mayfisherman

原文如下：
New York is built on a group of islands on the east coast of the USA at a point where several rivers flow into the ocean. The first westerner to discover these islands was an Italian explorer in 1524. In 1626 the island of Manhattan was bought from local Indians, Native Americans, for a handful of goods worth about $24. Today Native Americans express their anger over this business deal. After the War of Independence ended, New York became the capital of the USA for a short time before Washington, D.C.
  By 1820 the population of New York had grown to about 125,000, making it the largest city in the USA. In 1858 an area of poor housing, factories and farm buildings was torn down and Central Park was created, reaching from 59th Street to 110th Street and across three avenues. There is space for summer picnics, open-air concerts, plays and games. There is a zoo, an art museum, a boating lake, a smaller lake for model boats and, in winter, an ice-skating area.
  In 1892 the age of mass arrives began, during which 15 million new people passed through Ellis Island into the USA over a period of 62 years. Today Ellis Island is a museum, showing the roots of America's new citizens, who came from all the corners of the earth. Officials used to have trouble with the foreign names of people passing through Ellis Island, and because they were so busy, many people's names got changed in the rush.

IsaacZ

纠正如下：

• 所有的 / r / 音后如有元音，与 / l / 音区分不清。
• 元音字母后有字母 r 则卷舌儿化是美音特点，你有时儿化，有时不儿化。建议制定出确定的模仿方向——要么英音，要么美音。
• / l / 在词尾时，下一词若以元音开头，多连读，尤其涉及 of 时。
• 建议先慢慢读，读准了再加快速度。

时间所限，未能尽听，恕罪则个。附出错标记：

New York is built on a group of islands （后有介绍此处应断）on the （不够快，有迟疑）east coast of the USA at a point where several rivers flow into the ocean. The first westerner to discover these islands was an Italian explorer in 1524. In 1626（太短，易被误以为是60） the island of Manhattan was bought from local Indians, Native Americans, for a handful of （忘记连读）goods worth（忘记儿化）about $24（忘记儿化）. Today Native Americans express their anger （跟angel 混了？）over this business deal. After the War（忘记儿化） of Independence ended, New York became the capital of（忘记连读） the USA for a short time before Washington, D.C.

  By 1820（/ w / 读音不到位） the population of New York had grown to about 125,000, making it the largest city in the USA. In 1858 an area of poor housing, factories and farm buildings was torn down and Central Park was created, reaching from 59th Street to 110th Street and across three avenues. There is space for summer picnics, open-air concerts, plays and games. There is a zoo, an art museum, a boating lake, a smaller lake for model boats and, in winter, an ice-skating area.

  In 1892 the age of mass arrives began, during which 15 million new people passed through Ellis Island into the USA over a period of 62 years. Today Ellis Island is a museum, showing the roots of America's new citizens, who came from all the corners of the earth. Officials used to have trouble with the foreign names of people passing through Ellis Island, and because they were so busy, many people's names got changed in the rush.

danielxie0

版主好人呀。无私奉献，支持。